Thank you for taking the time to stop by on this beautiful and busy day. I hope you’ve enjoyed the offering at the various blogs. Happy Mother’s Day! Continue your Six Sentence Sunday journey here!
From my debut romantic suspense, BACKLASH, which is now available in print. Ebook options coming June 1st. Chase and Lily are indulging in a little them time.
Her shirt came off and pooled into a puddle of cotton on the floor. His mouth rushed over her jaw, down her neck, across her collarbone. Blood rushed to places she’d forgotten existed. She pressed closer. She pushed him back. All in a skirmish to gain ground, to come out the winner in a pleasure sweepstakes.
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I like the puddle of cotton.
Thanks, Kate!
Ooh, I love the battle to win the pleasure sweepstakes! Fun six.
Thanks, Kate! Sometimes you never know whether a line will work or not!
Hot six! I like the idea od the pleasure sweepstakes!
Glad you thought it was hot! Thanks, Paula!
Oh, I love this six! Very yummy indeed! 😉 “Pleasure sweepstakes” is FABULOUS!
Thanks, Lee Ann! I had fun coming up with that line and I’m glad it worked!
Oh my, it’s a contest? How can there be a loser? I’d like to see the rules. 😉 Great, sensual, six. 🙂
Thanks, Candice! No loser, just seeing who comes out on top 🙂
Terrific push and pull, and I love how you’ve structured the sentences to emphasize that. Nice six!
Thanks, Monica! I love playing with sentence structure!
I can’t wait until this comes out digitally! I’ve waited so long for Lily and Chase’s story and the above quote is just one of the many reasons!
Thanks, Silver! Not long now – June 1st!
This is a great six, made me smile, the whole “pleasure sweepstakes” metaphor is fun and HOT.
Thanks, Veronica! I have to admit writing sex scenes is a challenge for me so I’m glad part of it works.
The push, pull written in this six is great. It sucked me right in 🙂
Thanks, Melynda! I thought it paralleled her internal tug-of-war that takes place earlier on in the scene.
Hot six! Nicely done!
Thanks, Jennifer! I’m glad I managed to crank up the heat!
Nice imagery and metaphor. Congrats on the release!
Thanks, Linda! I love experimenting with those two devices!
Hot six. I like how they are almost wrestling for what they want. :o)
Thanks, Heather!!!!
Yummy, sexy and steamy. Great start with the puddle of cotton. The whole six is awesome!
Thanks, Mae Clair! It was a lot of fun to write this scene!
Great push and pull between them – I love it!
Thanks, Cassandra!!!
Can feel the rush from both of them. 🙂